Comments on
The Vault
by Ann Hollie
The Vault
by Ann Hollie
Contest/Other Stories
Vampire of the Gods
August 28, 2006
I read the excerpt from the vault. The book has great
promise of being a real good horror flick, but I got
the sense of reading a romance novel. I'm sure it's
just a short piece of the whole and that I am missing
the rest of the storie to balance everything out. I'm
just s guy though, I don't think that much about
emotional desires. The story did flow well though.
All and all, I think the writers went to great trouble
to be this detailed, a quality I do enjoy much.
People who enjoy this genre of story should
deffanitely read this book!
David McDowell
I read the excerpt from the vault. The book has great
promise of being a real good horror flick, but I got
the sense of reading a romance novel. I'm sure it's
just a short piece of the whole and that I am missing
the rest of the storie to balance everything out. I'm
just s guy though, I don't think that much about
emotional desires. The story did flow well though.
All and all, I think the writers went to great trouble
to be this detailed, a quality I do enjoy much.
People who enjoy this genre of story should
deffanitely read this book!
David McDowell
August 29, 2005
Definitely, the 2 women have sex appeal and charm. I like the fact, the
women, Aurora and Talia, are friends and how they look after one
another.
The most intriguing piece in the synopsis is where Aurora gets caught in
a trance by her own magic; while locked-in enrapture over this 1000
year old vampire and doesn't realize it. It was interesting because her
magic was out of control and makes me wonder why, how and what
made her loose control of her abilities the way she did?????? Curious to
learn how this all unfolds.
Thanx,
BIG Steve
Definitely, the 2 women have sex appeal and charm. I like the fact, the
women, Aurora and Talia, are friends and how they look after one
another.
The most intriguing piece in the synopsis is where Aurora gets caught in
a trance by her own magic; while locked-in enrapture over this 1000
year old vampire and doesn't realize it. It was interesting because her
magic was out of control and makes me wonder why, how and what
made her loose control of her abilities the way she did?????? Curious to
learn how this all unfolds.
Thanx,
BIG Steve
I just read a clip from, "The Vault", by Ann Hollie. Very interesting
perspective. I found the clip to be well written, with an enjoyable degree
of suspense what may next happen. Though I am not in the whole
vampire thing, I keep an open mind. Having recently visited New
Orleans I have wondered about the overwhelming popularity of the
subject in the area.
Jim Copeland
perspective. I found the clip to be well written, with an enjoyable degree
of suspense what may next happen. Though I am not in the whole
vampire thing, I keep an open mind. Having recently visited New
Orleans I have wondered about the overwhelming popularity of the
subject in the area.
Jim Copeland
You got me started and now I want to read the rest of the story.
Excellent presentation! Quite intriguing, suspenseful and the words paint
a clear picture. Looking forward to the opportunity to read more! Keep
up the good work...................you've got what it takes!
Laura J. Thomas
Excellent presentation! Quite intriguing, suspenseful and the words paint
a clear picture. Looking forward to the opportunity to read more! Keep
up the good work...................you've got what it takes!
Laura J. Thomas
I was just pulled into the story when it stopped. I love the details and the
descriptions of the characters. I felt alive while reading it. You know,
stepping into the book. I want more..............
Katie Bohle
descriptions of the characters. I felt alive while reading it. You know,
stepping into the book. I want more..............
Katie Bohle